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Natalie's writing completely summarizes the passage as well as some extra developments of the scene.
I believe, however, that she should incorporate more specific areas where here "tone" hypothesis is incorporated instead of only stating what tone is developed.
In effect of explaining the importance of this passage to the entire play, Ms. McCafferty could possibly explain how Banquo's suspicions are related later to his death.
Expanding upon the developments outside of the concrete story would aid her in writing and also would allow her writing to become more exact in our writing purpose.
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